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Stage 3: Constructing an initial outline plan

The Academic Essay

Construct an initial plan to guide your research. This plan will be like a road map for what you read and note.

  • Decide the general aspects of the question around which you'll concentrate your research.
  • Ask yourself questions: who, what, when, how, what if… around these general aspects you have selected.

Model Outline Plan

Topic: Discuss the impact of tertiary study on mature aged students.

Introduction: approximately 10% of total words

  • What you interpret tertiary studies and mature aged to mean.
  • A general (thesis) statement about type and size of the impact or effect of tertiary study on mature aged students.
  • A statement of intent to include an outline of the areas you'll consider in assessing the impact.
    For example: This essay will consider the financial, social and family impacts of tertiary studies on mature aged students.

Body: approximately 80% of the total words

Organise your body paragraphs to include a main idea, which is then proven, developed or illustrated by research/evidence.

Main idea
Financial Impacts

  • Loss of income
  • HECS
  • Austudy

Supporting information
home budget constraints

  • Childcare costs
  • Transport
  • Textbooks

Main Idea
Social Impacts

  • Loss of former peer group
  • Fewer social opportunities outside university
  • Social events within the university

Main Idea
Family Impacts

  • Fewer opportunities for family time
  • Change in household duties
  • More rigid family routine

Conclusion: Approximately 10% of total words

  • A restatement of your thesis about the type and size of the impacts of tertiary studies on mature aged students
  • A comment on consequences and implications for life after university.


Click on the following links for information about the Stages of the Essay:

  1. Choose a Topic
  2. Analyse the Question
  3. Construct an Initial Outline Plan
  4. Locate and Evaluate Resources
  5. Research/ Organise Notes
  6. Construct a Final Essay Plan
  7. Prepare the Rough Draft
  8. Redraft and Edit
  9. Prepare the Final Draft